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Phân tích bài mẫu dạng “Pro and Cons” – out of town
Essay plan
Position: Xu hướng phát triển lợi bất cập hại
Sample
Shopping patterns have been drastically changing in recent years, with the emergence of big out-of-town shops undermining small town-centre ones and giving rise to the increasing use of cars. While such a development is to a certain extent advantageous to consumers and retailers, I believe it does more harm than good due to its negative impacts on small shops, people who do not have cars and the environment.
The development of large shopping malls on the outskirts indeed offers shoppers and retailers some advantages. Large out-of-town stores benefiting from economies of scale have better prices and a wider array of commodities for consumers to choose from. Additionally, large shops often come with big parking spaces and leisure facilities such as restaurants, bowling alleys, and cinemas, which may provide better shopping experience. As a result, shoppers end up buying more, and retailers gain huge profits from growing consumerism.
Nevertheless, I believe the aforementioned advantages of such a trend pale into insignificance when compared with its tremendous disadvantages. One clear drawback of this phenomenon is that big shops sited on the outskirts may drive small ones to the brink of closure, thereby rendering people working for those shops unemployed. This is particularly the case with traditional, small-scale businesses that are unable to compete against big transnational corporations. Moreover, this shopping pattern is geared towards people with cars, so to some extent, it excludes certain underprivileged groups of people who do not own ones. Those large out-of-town shopping centers also bring in its wake increased traffic congestion in the suburbs especially at the weekends, and high emissions from influxes of vehicles travelling long distances.
In conclusion, my firm conviction is that whereas consumers and shop owners may reap some benefits from the growth of out-of-town shopping malls, this trend is more likely to bring negative consequences.
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Vocabulary highlights
Phân tích bài mẫu dạng “Pro and Cons” – buildings
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- Phân tích – Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 và 2 ngày 10-10-2020
Essay plan
Position: Xu hướng phát triển tiêu cực
Tham khảo: Khóa học IELTS 1 kèm 1 – Chỉ 1 thầy và 1 trò chắc chắn đạt điểm đầu ra
Sample
Some people are of the opinion that they should have freedom of choice when it comes to designing their own houses, and that they should not be restricted to any former local styles. Although freedom in architecture can be beneficial in fostering diversity, too much leeway in building houses would greatly spoil the overall landscape of the local area and therefore I believe this is more likely to be a negative development.
Free house design is, to a certain extent, a good way of promoting diversity. City skylines, for example, would be more interesting to look at if there are buildings and houses with different shapes and sizes. Furthermore, people from different societal background see houses as manifestations of personalities, wealth, and societal positions. Mansions of the rich, exotic houses of those who are artistic all combine with other normal-looking ones to form a melting pot of creativity.
However, I would not consider an area whose houses are built without any regard to the nature of the surroundings beautiful. Having different styles of houses co-existing in one place can be an architectural disaster rather than a welcome innovation. Ho Chi Minh City is a case in point; ugly buildings not aligned in style with other structures in the city have been erected for years, leaving the historic parts of the city messily mingled with the concrete jungle of brick houses and skyscrapers. Architectural homogeneity, on the other hand, often brings aesthetic appeals to the local landscape. The beauty of ancient towns, for example, comes from the uniformity and harmony in terms of architectural design.
In conclusion, my firm conviction is that new houses should be better built in a similar fashion to the other buildings in the area.
Tham khảo: Trọn bộ đề IELTS Writing Task 1 và IELTS Writing Task 2 qua từng năm
Vocabulary Highlights
Trên đây là bài viết về phân tích bài mẫu dạng “Pro and Cons” – buildings và out of town. Hi vọng 2 bài phân tích trên về dạng “Pro and Cons” sẽ giúp học viên cũng như các bạn đang học ôn luyện thi IELTS đạt được kết quả tốt nhất.
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